I really love how you're writing this. I feel even with the twist in plot, you're still very accurate in character for both Waylon and Eddie. Eddie still has his psychopathic mindset while Waylon is still in his survival mindset. I love how you are able to depict Eddie's insanity when writing from his point of view of the events. So I just wanted you to know I appreciate and admire your ability to stay in character for two characters with completely different mindsets. I really look forward to reading more.